Petrograd, The Red Flame Of Russia: An Alternate History

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Petrograd, The Red Flame Of Russia: An Alternate History

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Part One

Section One


In 1918, the nascent Soviet government which was formed following the Second All-Russian Congress of Soviets faced a dire situation; the spring and early summer of that year had brought with it the prospect of total annihilation by the counterrevolution, as the civil war raged across the former Russian Empire without ceasing. To make matters worse, a cholera outbreak in a Petrograd beset by supply problems, internal reaction both foreign and domestic, and rebellion only served to hasten the crisis as the city was evacuated and the capital moved to Nizhnii Novgorod. [1]

The Sovnarkom having departed hastily from Petrograd to the new capital, the Executive Committee of the Petrograd Soviet formed in it's absence the Council of Commissars of the Petrograd Labor Commune (SK PTK). Furthermore, the Executive Committee would also form a local Cheka in Petrograd (PCheka) on March 9th, to be headed by the Bolshevik Moisei Uritsky.

The government of the SK PTK was initially composed as follows, with the Bolshevik Zinoviev as chairperson: Lunacharskii (enlightenment); Viacheslav Menzhinskii (finance); Mikhail Lashevich (food supply); Petr Stuchka (justice); Viacheslav Molotov (economy); Adolf Ioffe (social welfare); Miron Vladimirov (transportation); and Ivar Smilga (Petrograd Military District). All were Bolsheviks. [2]

The newly created SK PTK government soon found itself struggling to maintain order in Petrograd wherein dissent was strong amongst the workers, whom along with moderate socialists would found the Extraordinary Assembly of Delegates from Petrograd Factories and Plants (EAD). The EAD found widespread support in industrial areas due to the advent of food supply shortages in the city which were brought on by the loss of the Ukraine to the Germans after the signing of the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk, which cut grain reserves in half by almost 350 million puds. [3] The EAD was further strengthened as a result of mass unemployment and inflation which inversely affected grain production in the countryside, causing only more unrest in the city.

The counterrevolution in Petrograd during the spring and summer of 1918 thrived under such tenuous conditions and, supported by the Entente powers, would take advantage of general disenchantment with the Soviet government as the crisis deepened. The PCheka, a clandestine organization created with the intent of safeguarding the emerging revolutionary order in Petrograd, operated independently of the national VCheka which had set itself up in the new capital at Nizhnii Novgorod. The two organizations, separate but similar in function, soon diverged in methods when it came to fighting counterrevolution.

The VCheka, formed on December 7th in place of the MRC and led by Felix Dzerzhinsky, sanctioned the shooting of alleged reactionaries-'counterrevolutionaries, speculators, thugs, hooligans, saboteurs, and other parasites'-on the spot on February 22nd during a meeting of the Sovnarkom between the Bolsheviks and Left SR's; at the meeting, the Left SR's voted against a document entitled The Socialist Fatherland Is In Danger but were defeated in their attempts to curb the steadily increasing powers of the VCheka. What irked the Left SR's was the inclusion of a provision in the document which allowed for the execution of counterrevolutionaries and common criminals. Fears of a German attack deeper into Russia shook the ruling Bolshevik-Left SR coalition, prompting an excessive increase in the VCheka's powers virtually overnight.

The PCheka on the other hand was more moderate under the leadership of Uritsky, whom was against arbitrary executions and tried to prevent shootings of prisoners wherever possible. This did not stop Uritsky from being derisively named the 'Robespierre of Petrograd' despite his aversion towards the harsher tactics being utilized by the VCheka.

Regardless, Uritsky's attempts to lessen the impact of the PCheka's preemptive actions towards perceived counterrevolutionaries would soon be challenged following the assassination of Volodarskii. A commissar for the press, agitation, and propaganda in the SK PTK government, Volodarskii's sudden death ushered in a surge of popular violence from below in Petrograd. Zinoviev was against immediate repression despite urgings by workers and Krasnaia gazeta colleagues of Volodarskii to seek revenge. Lenin would recommend mass terror and was furious that so far leading Bolsheviks operating in Petrograd had refused to respond to the vengeful mood of workers.

Unbeknownst to the Bolsheviks, the Left SR Party had approved as a contingency option the assassination of leading German officials following the Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets at their own Third All-Russian Left SR Party Congress. The Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets, largely expected to having been vote rigged by the Bolsheviks, produced a Bolshevik majority of 678 delegates to the Left SR's 269 delegates. Unable to challenge the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk through electoral means, the Left SR's central committee considered the proposal for assassinations.

Grigorii Smolianskii, as secretary of the CEC and as a member of the Left SR's Battle Organization, would go in secret to Berlin in an attempt to entangle German Social-Democrats into a conspiratorial plan to assassinate Kaiser Wilhelm II. Other key figures designated for assassination were General Eikhord, the commander of German occupation forces in the Ukraine and Count Mirbach, the German ambassador to Soviet Russia.

When the Social-Democrats refused to join the Left SR plot to murder the Kaiser, the Left SR's central committee made a final decision: General Eikhord was to be assassinated, whose death was meant to provoke Germany into resuming hostilities against Soviet Russia's budding revolutionary forces. [4] General Eikhord would be killed by Left SR Chekists in July, after several days of preparation occurring after the opening session of the Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets held in Nizhnii Novgorod.

Unfortunately for the Left SR Party, no German retaliation took place. Unofficial telephone and telegraph communications were cut from within Nizhnii Novgorod, while motor traffic to and from the city was tightly regulated. While the VCheka headquarters was combed for the Left SR's leadership (the VCheka headquarters having become the command center for the Left SR Party), the Left SR Fifth Congress fraction was simultaneously found and arrested by the Soviet authorities.

Immediately branded as 'scoundrels' and 'new servants of the white guards' by the authorities, hundreds of Left SR cadre were soon arrested while many were summarily executed as well. Gradually, surely, all traces of the Left SR Party would be cast out from the soviets by extraordinary military-revolutionary troikas.

An immediate consequence of the Left SR's sudden ouster from the soviets and other governmental bodies countrywide would be the heightening of Red Terror. Despite Uritsky's best attempts to thwart the advent of Red Terror, his actions only served to delay its outbreak. The Red Terror, when combined with the removal of all other socialist, left-wing parties from participation in the Soviet government, would bring about the creation of the single-party state model in Soviet Russia.

With the Bolsheviks' rear effectively secured against further domestic opposition, the fight against the Whites in the Russian Civil War took top priority throughout the remainder of the year.

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Section One Footnotes


[1]: In OTL the capital was moved from Petrograd to Moscow, a decision which was protested by the Bolshevik Zinoviev on the grounds that the new capital should be placed instead in a less crucial city as this would increase the likelihood of the capital moving back to Petrograd.


[2]: Later, during elections to the Sovkom of the Northern Oblast in May, four Left SR Party members would be given posts in the SK PTK government: Proshian, whom replaced the Bolshevik Moisei Uritsky as head of the Committee for Internal Affairs and of the Committee for the Revolutionary Security of Petrograd; M. D. Samokhvalov (oblast control); Nikolai Kornilov (agriculture); and Leonid Bekleshov (post and telegraph).


[3]: A total of 650 million puds of grain had been reserved. An additional 110 million puds came from the North Caucasus, 143 million puds from the steppe borderlands and Western Siberia, with all the rest coming from the Central black earth region. With the loss of the Ukraine, coupled with the severing of grain reserves from the North Caucasus through the German occupation of Kursk and Voronezh, only about 150 million puds of grain could be relied upon.

[4]: In OTL Count Mirbach was assassinated by the Left SR Chekists Iakov Blumkin and Nikolai Andreev in Moscow.
 
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What do people think of my TL so far? What are it's strengths/weaknesses? Is it good/bad?

As it is a work in progress, it is subject to changes here-and-there until I finish it.

The plot line involving the Soviet Union was originally going to be a minor part of a TL involving a different early United States (which was scrapped), but I then decided to make the TL solely about an alternate USSR and World War Two.

Section Two will involve an alternate Polish-Soviet War which will end in the fall of Warsaw (but to the dismay of Lenin the Red Army, exhausted and low on supplies, doesn't advance to Berlin and instead consolidates it's gains in a Poland carved up between Germany and the emerging Soviet state)

Other sections will document the rise of the Nazis in Germany (Lenin's "united front" strategy for Germany, in which he urged communists to ally with the far-right, unfortunately for him doesn't lead to revolution in the long run), as well as the rise of Leon Trotsky from within the Bolshevik Party, the outbreak of WWII over Czechoslovakia (as there is no Poland), etc.

I may visit my earlier ideas in a different TL after I finish this one.

Comments? ;)
 
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I'm very iffy on that period of history so I will definitely be following this to see where you lead it...at least for the early period.

The second half what with WW2 - sounds interesting enough.

Would Uritsky really kill himself, you think?
 
The plot point with Uritsky I have already changed. I've been rethinking several parts of the story and will release more in the following days/weeks.

In total I have around a page of AH completed. My goal is 3-5 pages of story.
 
What do people think of my TL so far? What are it's strengths/weaknesses? Is it good/bad?

It looks pretty good. I lack the knowledge to judge its authenticity, since it includes so much deep detail.

The plot line involving the Soviet Union was originally going to be a minor part of a TL involving a different early United States (which was scrapped), but I then decided to make the TL solely about an alternate USSR and World War Two.

Good idea, IMHO. If the early US is different, that butterflies the context of OTL's Bolshevik Revolution.
 
Thanks for the feedback. :)

I find myself editing my story quite a bit. The part with Uritsky, IMHO, isn't improbable (he could have avoided assassination), and as for the part about him committing suicide, his death was based off of Adolf Joffe's suicide in 1927. (whom also wrote a detailed and long suicide note)

I'm partially rewriting the end of section 1, while section 2 will detail the years 1919-1921 (the height of the Russian Civil War + the Polish-Soviet War)

Each section of Part One will detail a certain year or years. Primarily my focus will be on the rise of Leon Trotsky to power from within the Bolshevik Party (I will attempt to make it realistic, and will try my best to avoid cliches) and then an alternate WWII over Czechoslovakia.
 
Looking forward to where you take this. I'm really interested in this period of history but it's very complex and I'm not confident I could give more than a detailed summary, if you know what I mean. Looks like you've done your research so far.
 
Your feedback is greatly appreciated, everyone. :)

Any more comments?

I've worked very had just on section one alone. Section two will be fun, I promise. It will mainly cover inner-party (Bolshevik) intrigue, the height of the Russian Civil War (i.e. it will briefly cover the numerous military engagements between the Red and White forces), and last but not least the (successful) Red Army engagement with Polish forces from 1919-21 will be heavily detailed wherein Warsaw falls in the end. (but not Berlin; in real life Red Army forces were exhausted and low on supplies when they failed in OTL to seize Warsaw and I don't see it as realistic to have them march towards Berlin so soon after concluding hostilities with Poland + it's more interesting/realistic AH-wise to have Poland be carved up by the victor instead of having the [cliche] Red Army invasion of central/western Europe)

BTW-Part Two, if I make it (I'm leaving my AH open for a part two) will detail the alternate WWII. Part One is planned to end in a cliffhanger just before the outbreak of the ALT TL WWII.
 
I've updated my AH and will soon enough work on Part Two.

Part Two will cover the years 1919-21, primarily detailing the Russian Civil War and the Polish-Soviet War.

Feel free to comment on my AH and discuss. Cheers. :)
 
Here is the (final) edit for Section One. Section Two is coming soon.


Section One


In 1918, the nascent Soviet government which was formed following the Second All-Russian Congress of Soviets faced a dire situation; the spring and early summer of that year had brought with it the prospect of total annihilation by the counterrevolution, as the civil war raged across the former Russian Empire without ceasing. To make matters worse, a cholera outbreak in a Petrograd beset by supply problems, internal reaction both foreign and domestic, and rebellion only served to hasten the crisis as the city was evacuated and the capital moved to Nizhnii Novgorod. [1]

The Sovnarkom having departed hastily from Petrograd to the new capital, the Executive Committee of the Petrograd Soviet formed in it's absence the Council of Commissars of the Petrograd Labor Commune (SK PTK). Furthermore, the Executive Committee would also form a local Cheka in Petrograd (PCheka) on March 9th, to be headed by the Bolshevik Moisei Uritsky.

The government of the SK PTK was initially composed as follows, with the Bolshevik Zinoviev as chairperson: Lunacharskii (enlightenment); Viacheslav Menzhinskii (finance); Mikhail Lashevich (food supply); Petr Stuchka (justice); Viacheslav Molotov (economy); Adolf Ioffe (social welfare); Miron Vladimirov (transportation); and Ivar Smilga (Petrograd Military District). All were Bolsheviks. [2]

The newly created SK PTK government soon found itself struggling to maintain order in Petrograd wherein dissent was strong amongst the workers, whom along with moderate socialists would found the Extraordinary Assembly of Delegates from Petrograd Factories and Plants (EAD). The EAD found widespread support in industrial areas due to the advent of food supply shortages in the city which were brought on by the loss of the Ukraine to the Germans after the signing of the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk, which cut grain reserves in half by almost 350 million puds. [3] The EAD was further strengthened as a result of mass unemployment and inflation which inversely affected grain production in the countryside, causing only more unrest in the city.

The counterrevolution in Petrograd during the spring and summer of 1918 thrived under such tenuous conditions and, supported by the Entente powers, would take advantage of general disenchantment with the Soviet government as the crisis deepened. The PCheka, a clandestine organization created with the intent of safeguarding the emerging revolutionary order in Petrograd, operated independently of the national VCheka which had set itself up in the new capital at Nizhnii Novgorod. The two organizations, separate but similar in function, soon diverged in methods when it came to fighting counterrevolution.

The VCheka, formed on December 7th in place of the MRC and led by Felix Dzerzhinsky, sanctioned the shooting of alleged reactionaries-'counterrevolutionaries, speculators, thugs, hooligans, saboteurs, and other parasites'-on the spot on February 22nd during a meeting of the Sovnarkom between the Bolsheviks and Left SR's; at the meeting, the Left SR's voted against a document entitled The Socialist Fatherland Is In Danger but were defeated in their attempts to curb the steadily increasing powers of the VCheka. What irked the Left SR's was the inclusion of a provision in the document which allowed for the execution of counterrevolutionaries and common criminals. Fears of a German attack deeper into Russia shook the ruling Bolshevik-Left SR coalition, prompting an excessive increase in the VCheka's powers virtually overnight.

The PCheka on the other hand was more moderate under the leadership of Uritsky, whom was against arbitrary executions and tried to prevent shootings of prisoners wherever possible. This did not stop Uritsky from being derisively named the 'Robespierre of Petrograd' despite his aversion towards the harsher tactics being utilized by the VCheka.

Regardless, Uritsky's attempts to lessen the impact of the PCheka's preemptive actions towards perceived counterrevolutionaries would soon be challenged following the assassination of Volodarskii. A commissar for the press, agitation, and propaganda in the SK PTK government, Volodarskii's sudden death ushered in a surge of popular violence from below in Petrograd. Zinoviev was against immediate repression despite urgings by workers and Krasnaia gazeta colleagues of Volodarskii to seek revenge. Lenin would recommend mass terror and was furious that so far leading Bolsheviks operating in Petrograd had refused to respond to the vengeful mood of workers.

Unbeknownst to the Bolsheviks, the Left SR Party had approved as a contingency option the assassination of leading German officials following the Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets at their own Third All-Russian Left SR Party Congress. The Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets, largely expected to having been vote rigged by the Bolsheviks, produced a Bolshevik majority of 678 delegates to the Left SR's 269 delegates. Unable to challenge the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk through electoral means, the Left SR's central committee considered the proposal for assassinations.

Grigorii Smolianskii, as secretary of the CEC and as a member of the Left SR's Battle Organization, would go in secret to Berlin in an attempt to entangle German Social-Democrats into a conspiratorial plan to assassinate Kaiser Wilhelm II. Other key figures designated for assassination were General Eikhord, the commander of German occupation forces in the Ukraine and Count Mirbach, the German ambassador to Soviet Russia.

When the Social-Democrats refused to join the Left SR plot to murder the Kaiser, the Left SR's central committee made a final decision: General Eikhord was to be assassinated, whose death was meant to provoke Germany into resuming hostilities against Soviet Russia's budding revolutionary forces. [4] General Eikhord would be killed by Left SR Chekists in July, after several days of preparation occurring after the opening session of the Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets held in Nizhnii Novgorod.

Unfortunately for the Left SR Party, no German retaliation took place. Unofficial telephone and telegraph communications were cut from within Nizhnii Novgorod, while motor traffic to and from the city was tightly regulated. While the VCheka headquarters was combed for the Left SR's leadership (the VCheka headquarters having become the command center for the Left SR Party), the Left SR Fifth Congress fraction was simultaneously found and arrested by the Soviet authorities.

Immediately branded as 'scoundrels' and 'new servants of the white guards' by the authorities, hundreds of Left SR cadre were soon arrested while many were summarily executed as well. Gradually, surely, all traces of the Left SR Party would be cast out from the soviets by extraordinary military-revolutionary troikas.

An immediate consequence of the Left SR's sudden ouster from the soviets and other governmental bodies countrywide would be the heightening of Red Terror. Despite Uritsky's best attempts to thwart the advent of Red Terror, his actions only served to delay its outbreak. The Red Terror, when combined with the removal of all other socialist, left-wing parties from participation in the Soviet government, would bring about the creation of the single-party state model in Soviet Russia.

With the Bolsheviks' rear effectively secured against further domestic opposition, the fight against the Whites in the Russian Civil War took top priority throughout the remainder of the year.
 
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Here is the (final) edit for Section One. Section Two is coming soon.


Section One

In 1918, the nascent Soviet government which was formed following the Second All-Russian Congress of Soviets faced a dire situation; the spring and early summer of that year had brought with it the prospect of total annihilation by the counterrevolution, as the civil war raged across the former Russian Empire without ceasing. To make matters worse, a cholera outbreak in a Petrograd beset by supply problems, internal reaction both foreign and domestic, and rebellion only served to hasten the crisis as the city was evacuated and the capital moved to Nizhnii Novgorod. [1]

The Sovnarkom having departed hastily from Petrograd to the new capital, the Executive Committee of the Petrograd Soviet formed in it's absence the Council of Commissars of the Petrograd Labor Commune (SK PTK). Furthermore, the Executive Committee would also form a local Cheka in Petrograd (PCheka) on March 9th, to be headed by the Bolshevik Moisei Uritsky.

The government of the SK PTK was initially composed as follows, with the Bolshevik Zinoviev as chairperson: Lunacharskii (enlightenment); Viacheslav Menzhinskii (finance); Mikhail Lashevich (food supply); Petr Stuchka (justice); Viacheslav Molotov (economy); Adolf Ioffe (social welfare); Miron Vladimirov (transportation); and Ivar Smilga (Petrograd Military District). All were Bolsheviks. [2]

The newly created SK PTK government soon found itself struggling to maintain order in Petrograd wherein dissent was strong amongst the workers, whom along with moderate socialists would found the Extraordinary Assembly of Delegates from Petrograd Factories and Plants (EAD). The EAD found widespread support in industrial areas due to the advent of food supply shortages in the city which were brought on by the loss of the Ukraine to the Germans after the signing of the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk, which cut grain reserves in half by almost 350 million puds. [3] The EAD was further strengthened as a result of mass unemployment and inflation which inversely affected grain production in the countryside, causing only more unrest in the city.

The counterrevolution in Petrograd during the spring and summer of 1918 thrived under such tenuous conditions and, supported by the Entente powers, would take advantage of general disenchantment with the Soviet government as the crisis deepened. The PCheka, a clandestine organization created with the intent of safeguarding the emerging revolutionary order in Petrograd, operated independently of the national VCheka which had set itself up in the new capital at Nizhnii Novgorod. The two organizations, separate but similar in function, soon diverged in methods when it came to fighting counterrevolution.

The VCheka, formed on December 7th in place of the MRC and led by Felix Dzerzhinsky, sanctioned the shooting of alleged reactionaries-'counterrevolutionaries, speculators, thugs, hooligans, saboteurs, and other parasites'-on the spot on February 22nd during a meeting of the Sovnarkom between the Bolsheviks and Left SR's; at the meeting, the Left SR's voted against a document entitled The Socialist Fatherland Is In Danger but were defeated in their attempts to curb the steadily increasing powers of the VCheka. What irked the Left SR's was the inclusion of a provision in the document which allowed for the execution of counterrevolutionaries and common criminals. Fears of a German attack deeper into Russia shook the ruling Bolshevik-Left SR coalition, prompting an excessive increase in the VCheka's powers virtually overnight.

The PCheka on the other hand was more moderate under the leadership of Uritsky, whom was against arbitrary executions and tried to prevent shootings of prisoners wherever possible. This did not stop Uritsky from being derisively named the 'Robespierre of Petrograd' despite his aversion towards the harsher tactics being utilized by the VCheka.

Regardless, Uritsky's attempts to lessen the impact of the PCheka's preemptive actions towards perceived counterrevolutionaries would soon be challenged following the assassination of Volodarskii. A commissar for the press, agitation, and propaganda in the SK PTK government, Volodarskii's sudden death ushered in a surge of popular violence from below in Petrograd. Zinoviev was against immediate repression despite urgings by workers and Krasnaia gazeta colleagues of Volodarskii to seek revenge. Lenin would recommend mass terror and was furious that so far leading Bolsheviks operating in Petrograd had refused to respond to the vengeful mood of workers.

Unbeknownst to the Bolsheviks, the Left SR Party had approved as a contingency option the assassination of leading German officials following the Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets at their own Third All-Russian Left SR Party Congress. The Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets, largely expected to having been vote rigged by the Bolsheviks, produced a Bolshevik majority of 678 delegates to the Left SR's 269 delegates. Unable to challenge the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk through electoral means, the Left SR's central committee considered the proposal for assassinations.

Grigorii Smolianskii, as secretary of the CEC and as a member of the Left SR's Battle Organization, would go in secret to Berlin in an attempt to entangle German Social-Democrats into a conspiratorial plan to assassinate Kaiser Wilhelm II. Other key figures designated for assassination were General Eikhord, the commander of German occupation forces in the Ukraine and Count Mirbach, the German ambassador to Soviet Russia.

When the Social-Democrats refused to join the Left SR plot to murder the Kaiser, the Left SR's central committee made a final decision: General Eikhord was to be assassinated, whose death was meant to provoke Germany into resuming hostilities against Soviet Russia's budding revolutionary forces. [4] General Eikhord would be killed by Left SR Chekists in July, after several days of preparation occurring after the opening session of the Fifth All-Russian Congress of Soviets held in Nizhnii Novgorod.

Unfortunately for the Left SR Party, no German retaliation took place. Unofficial telephone and telegraph communications were cut from within Nizhnii Novgorod, while motor traffic to and from the city was tightly regulated. While the VCheka headquarters was combed for the Left SR's leadership (the VCheka headquarters having become the command center for the Left SR Party), the Left SR Fifth Congress fraction was simultaneously found and arrested by the Soviet authorities.

Immediately branded as 'scoundrels' and 'new servants of the white guards' by the authorities, hundreds of Left SR cadre were soon arrested while many were summarily executed as well. Gradually, surely, all traces of the Left SR Party would be cast out from the soviets by extraordinary military-revolutionary troikas.

An immediate consequence of the Left SR's sudden ouster from the soviets and other governmental bodies countrywide would be the heightening of Red Terror. Despite Uritsky's best attempts to thwart the advent of Red Terror, his actions only served to delay its outbreak. The Red Terror, when combined with the removal of all other socialist, left-wing parties from participation in the Soviet government, would bring about the creation of the single-party state model in Soviet Russia.

With the Bolsheviks' rear effectively secured against further domestic opposition, the fight against the Whites in the Russian Civil War took top priority throughout the remainder of the year.

I have no comment on this message. I just inserted blank lines to break up the original "wall of text" which I found unreadable.
 
I think it is really interesting. Is the moderate bolshevick faction still alive?

I am reading the Book "The Bolshevicks In power" By Alexander Rabinpovitch, I am only just starting. But I will see if I can use that book to help you with anything.
 
I am reading the Book "The Bolshevicks In power" By Alexander Rabinpovitch

I have that book as well and had finished a few years ago. Much of my research for section one came from The Bolshevik In Power btw.

As I've said before, I'm utilizing the library for most of my research for most of the other sections. But I also possess a small collection of books on key subjects as well.

I was originally going to have the Left SR Party work alongside the Bolsheviks throughout the civil war but that would've negated (IMHO) many different aspects of Soviet/Bolshevik history during and after the civil war and, as I gradually found out, keeping the Left SR Party from being outlawed would have been harder said then done.

Hence why I essentially rewrote the last few paragraphs of section one.

As this is a work in progress, I am still doing a good deal of editing throughout my work and because I have to deal with school/life, etc. updates will be forthcoming and occasional, but not immediate.

When I'm done (my goal is 4-5 pages, if not more) I'll post it in the finished alternate history section on this forum.
 
Section Two


As 1918 gave way to 1919, the civil war continued fiercer still. The Red Guard workers' militia served as the nucleus for a new 'proletarian army,' the Red Army. Mass conscription of the peasantry was enacted to further the goal of forging a million-man army. Gradually the inefficiencies of the Red Guard were superseded by the formation of an All-Russian Main Staff and an All-Russian Bureau of Military Commissars, ex-Tsarist officers having been forced into the fledgling Red Army. Local soviets' control over the military was replaced by provincial Military Commissars, their authority extending outwards from Nizhnii Novgorod. Six new military districts would be created, with a Northern screen covering Petrograd and a Western screen covering Nizhnii Novgorod.


The Red Guard had faced a series of initial defeats in Finland and Estonia, having been forced out from both regions by 1919. The White Finns had been better led and possessed superior troops which included the elite Finnish nationalist soldiers known as Jagers. The Soviet regime begrudgingly recognized the independence of Finland and Estonia. Another region under the Reds' control, Bessarabia, would fall to Romanian troops. The Moldavian People's Republic which temporarily governed Bessarabia ended just three months after it was created, with Bessarabia merging with Romania in April 1918. In the Caucasus mountains region, a Transcaucasus Democratic Federative Republic was established on April 22, 1918 which was dominated by local Georgian Mensheviks and the Azerbaidzhani Musavat Party, nationalists having won fifty-eight percent of the vote in the Assembly elections. Power passed to a Transcaucasian Commissariat based in Tbilisi.

Elsewhere the Reds were more fortunate. On December 4th, 1917 an ultimatum was issued to the Central Rada which ruled the Ukraine from Kiev. Shortly thereafter the Ukraine would be invaded, The Bolsheviks having formed a Ukrainian Republic of Soviets in Kharkov. Forces were diverted from the railway war which was being waged against the Cossacks, with an army several-thousand strong led by Lieutenant Colonel Muraviev headed towards Kiev. Towns along the way welcomed the advancing troops and came out in support of Soviet power. Kiev was bombarded by artillery, the city having fallen shortly after the Rada's retreat from the city. A reign of terror would be initiated against officers and Ukrainian nationalists, marking the end of Ukrainian independence and the start of Soviet power in the region. The Ukrainian Soviet Socialist Republic was set up which was led by the Communist Party of the Ukraine, which soon set out to carry through radical social-economic reforms across the Ukrainian countryside which significantly alienated the Ukrainian peasantry from the new Ukrainian Soviet government.


As the fighting continued throughout 1919 across far-flung fronts stretching along the Volga, the Don, and in the Urals, the year 1920 saw a Polish attack into Soviet Ukraine on April 25, 1920. The attack was swift and, led by the Polish head of state and commander-in-chief Jozef Pilsudski, succeeded in taking control of Kiev in May 1920. Luckily for the Reds, The Red Twelfth and Fourteenth Armies escaped unharmed. The Red Southwestern Army Group under the Bolshevik colonel Egorov counterattacked, retaking Kiev on June 12th.


From Belorussia the Western Army Group under Tukhachevsky chased the retreating Polish army four-hundred miles to the Vistula River. Backed by the Sixteenth, Third, Fifteenth, and Fourth Armies as well as the Third Cavalry Corps, Tukhachevsky's forces moved against the Polish forces defending the River Vistula along a front stretching for two-hundred miles.


Supporting Tukhachevsky was the Southwestern Army Group under Colonel Kamenev, which had moved northwards towards Brest to come to the aid of the Western Army Group. [1] The First Calvary Army and the Twelfth Army linked up with Tukhachevsky's men and, after an intense fight the Battle of the Vistula was won by the Reds. Having Swallowed in their pride, the Southwestern Army Group commanders' assistance proved decisive. Warsaw soon fell.

The ensuing Peace of Minsk held in 1921 within Soviet Belorussia decimated Poland. The army was cut down from 740,000 men to a mere 50,000, with extra arms having gone to a newly-created Polish Red Guard. A Provisional Polish Revolutionary Committee (PolRevCom) was established in Warsaw, which quickly went about destroying the old order. Land was collectivized while industry was nationalized, with the PolRevCom eventually making way for a Polish Communist Workers' Party which would lead the Polish Soviet Socialist Republic.

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Section Two Footnotes:

[1]: In OTL the Southwestern Army Group's forces headed southwest towards Lvov and thus could not affect the outcome of the Battle of the Vistula.
 
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Section Three will come in the immediate future. Does anyone have any comments thus far on my alternate history?

I've worked really hard on it, and would like to see what others think about my work so far.

I almost have 2,000 words, and I expect that the finished product will go way beyond 2,000 words.

Section Three will deal with the ensuing power struggle after Lenin's death.
 
Any further comments? Is it well written?

I've been plunging into biographies, history books, and the internet to write this AH.

A pet peeve of mine in relation to "Trotsky takes power" AH is realism; Trotsky was markedly different from Stalin for a variety of reasons, and wouldn't have led the Soviet Union down the same path as Stalin.

Still, I think that barring a German or Italian Revolution the Soviet Union would still go through a period of rapid industrialization and collectivization of agriculture, something which Trotsky wasn't opposed to.

Poland's fall in my AH I admit could be seen as a stretch, but my basic assumption is that the Southwestern Army Group's commander(s) made a different decision from OTL; instead of heading southwest towards Lvov in the interest of slicing the Polish army in half, the order is given out to head northwest towards Brest which would put the Southwest Army Group's forces closer to the location of the Western Army Group preparing to assault Polish defenses outside Warsaw.

The extra armies/forces provided by the Southwestern Army Group make up for the appalling casualties suffered by the Western Army Group, allowing the Red Army to breach the Polish defenses along the Vistula through sheer force of numbers

With Poland a part of the new Soviet state, WWII is planned to be different of course.

Future sections will cover Wiemar Germany and developments in the U.S. in the 1930's (WWI and the roaring twenties still happen as in OTL, so my assumption is that the Great Depression and the Wall Street Crash of 1929 isn't butterflied away and in fact does happen, with Alfred E. Smith and not FDR playing a major role early on in an alternate Great Depression-era U.S.)

For that I'm been reading a good biography of Alfred E. Smith, not to mention the wonderful book (of which I have yet to check out for the library) Freedom From Fear: The American People In Depression And War, 1929-1945.
 
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The Polish Soviet is an interesting turn of events to be sure. Is it part of the Soviet Union or a separate state? Either way I think it would have a profound effect on the Soviet Union, especially in the early years but also in regards to future alliances down the line.
 
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